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The Query Letter that Got Me 4 Agent Offers
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The Query Letter that Got Me 4 Agent Offers

and my first eventual book deal.

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Sarah Allen
Jan 20, 2025
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Below is the complete and unedited (except for the redacted agent name) of the query letter that got me an agent and my first book deal.

This query letter has some good points, and some imperfections. It follows good query structure and still shows some fun voiciness and personality, but it’s probably too long. But it worked! This is the book and the query that helped me get four offers of representation. I hope it helps you in your querying journey. Good luck!


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